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Tuesday 8 August 2017

Bliss Ball Poem


Hook: Have You ever had a bliss ball before?,
trust me they are good...



 The Sparkly glitter of coconut joy, Spreads thru the class's , and joy became, a coco bliss of bright bliss joy, love of bitter chocolate smells, sparkling, odd and lovable tastes, runs through the snow, the coconut chased, the bliss blash ball of shining disco lights, is now eatable, flesh flash brightness, how i love the smell of the sweet Extreme, Powerful, bliss ball....

LOVE IT, EAT IT
BAKE IT, TOP IT

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2 comments:

  1. Annameika Jack14 August 2017 at 08:58

    Wow, what an amazing poem you have written Mediana. I love the way you have used descriptive verbs and adjectives. Next time we could look at setting the poem out a little differently so it is easier to read.

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    1. Anonymous22 August 2017 at 12:32

      thanks for your comment miss jack

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