Snot
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Write 8-10 sentences, use wow words ,
a link to Show don't tell- mud writing
Is it slime, goop, snot or green vomit? I’ve never seen green vomit before!
the green substance of the squishy liquid was placed in front of the desk.
It looked like scrambled eggs with creamy beans, and it was solid green. I didn’t what to touch it with my beer hands. “It looked like horrible liquid” and after I touched it, then I made it go splat. It was now a flat pancake and I laughed and said “ Ewww! that looks disgusting !. After that someone looked at my slimy snot and had a interesting look upon her face. I looked away for a moment and touched it at the same time. And I thought about the smiley snot. After that I suddenly felt like a scientist doing experiences on Zombies Green slimy liquidity blood. I feel grossed out after touching it. I smelt it and it smelt like shampoo and green paint that ends up being thrown out into the rubbish bin mix together.
Hi Mediana, I really like how you put a link so people can see your mud writing! Maybe next time you could make the writing one colour!
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