14/11.2016 make a picture

Cat Tastrphe

We have been learning how to write persuasive piece of writing. We had to convince  Miss McLeod to ether get a Cat or dog. I chose to persuade Miss McLeod to get a cat. 
This is my persuasive writing. I had to use persuasive words and phases that we're  convincing. 
I enjoyed persuading Miss McLeod.
I learned How to find the persuasive word.

• The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
• Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
• The reasons why with supporting ideas

It’s Miss Mcleod's last chance to get a cat because they are they are cheap save money and did you Know cats are the easiest to look after?.

Firstly  miss mcleod should get a cat because they clean themselves up so you don’t need to clean them. And cats have sharp strong paws for climbing and hunting for food And they give you presents, the presents are a mice or a bird.

Cats are the most fluffiest animals in NZ so far. I meet one of my cat youngest cousin. And she is the fluffiest Kitten I’ve meet.

And she’s funny and cute.

Secondly, Miss McLeod should get a cat because they have strong paws and They use their strong paws to climb trees if a dog is chasing them. And cats use their paws to hunt for food when they are outside. They hunt mice and birds. And they keep mice out of the house and they like to climb and they

have brilliant balance because their sharp paws. They look crazy after a shave!

Did you know they are really good climbers because of their paws and claws?

Finally, Miss mcleod should get a cat because they take care of themselves. They lick themselves up so they are clean before you get home. Instead of cleaning their poop it's useful because they  poop outside then cover their poop up. And they don’t eat much then dogs. Miss mcleod can really save money isn't it great not have to use a 50 dollar bill.

Overall I think Miss mcleod should get a cat tastic friend because they take care of themselves by pooping outdoors and cleaning themselves before you  get home.  

  

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writing complex sentience

Mediana The two girls  that are on the bikes on the hot yellow sand. The two girl’s are on bikes on the hot yellow sand and sun sparkles likes a star on a beautiful sunset.

                                                                   

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