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Friday 21 October 2016

writing complex sentience




Mediana
The two girls  that are on the bikes on the hot yellow sand.
The two girl’s are on bikes on the hot yellow sand and sun sparkles likes a star on a beautiful sunset.



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  1. Nathan27 October 2016 at 11:34

    Hello Mediana I liked the way you added a picture. It was cool the way you highlighted the complex words. Next time it would help if you centered your work so your box does not go out of the center of this page

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