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Friday 2 June 2017

Paul Jennings Antarctica Description Writing


Evaluation
Love To Go, Interested, Awesome Experience Facts.    
Draft:
Surface: Did You Know There’s a Desert Under All That Ice And Snow?

Well It’s Not Just Ice And Snow On The Ground, There's More Of Land Then It Seems To Be.
It’s A Dry Desert! Just The Ice And Freezing Snow All Covers The True Land Of Antarctica.
Weather: Did You Know What Antarctica Is The Coldest Place On Earth?

Well The Highest Wind Is 199:mph And On Record Is 371:Km/h, You Can See The Wind Is Crazy High.

Animals: Did You Know If Polar Bears We’re In Antarctica Penguins Would Be Endangered?

Penguins, Seals, Whales And Krill…

Penguin, Seals And Whales Eat Krill And Each Year Not Just 1 Comes, 1000 Krill Come And They Come Each Year! For The Animals Of Antarctica!

Antarctica Is A Very Interesting  Place With Lots Of Facts To Learn About!

3 comments:

  1. Hi Mediana,
    Right now I can see that you need a description about what you did and what you learnt.

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  2. One thing I know.It is a description Writing

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  3. Thank you Aletheia And yes it is a description...

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