Hi Mediana, I'm Nika from St Bernadette's School. I like how you used lots of strong describing words. Maybe next time you could put different sentence starters instead of just "I remember". Why did you choose the season of summer?
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Hi Mediana, I'm Nika from St Bernadette's School. I like how you used lots of strong describing words. Maybe next time you could put different sentence starters instead of just "I remember". Why did you choose the season of summer?
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