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Friday 1 April 2016

Autumn



Attempt 1:
The weather gets colder because winter is coming. Leaves fall off the trees because the leave the trees get more leaves. The sun comes up later because we get longer night & shorter days. The clouds go over the sun because we get more wind. What do you say when you hear sleep? Because animals hibernate. Colourful leaves fall off all over.
Attempt :2
The weather is chilly every day because winter is a  freezer with ice in it. The colourful leaves fall off the tall trees because The colourful leave fall off & die on the cold hard ground. The white  fluffy woolly clouds goes over the heated sun because the wind blows away the sun a little bit. We get shorter daylight savings and longer, nights save the world. What do you say when you hear sleep? Because animals sleep in winter to stay warm it’s called hibernation for winters weather. Poor leave die and let go of the tree all on the ground & beautiful people rake up the leaves so you can see the path.
Attempt :3
Autumn is a beautiful season to play in the leaves because all the beautiful leaves are like a rainbow entered your life. As They fall into the freezer and lock the leafy leaves in there. They are dead by winter because the windy fans is coming closer & closer. But the tree is for 2-3 months lonely until spring comes and the tree gets lucky to get new leaves in spring. The leaves jump of the strawberries with cream.
                                                        Mediana Rush
                                                    South hornby school

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